no, not her. me. i'm melodramatic. meaning over-dramatic.
and all i wrote was:
"these rebuttals need no elaboration,
for without these assumptions,
the writer is left shivering in the cold"
for without these assumptions,
the writer is left shivering in the cold"
and
"even babies know that the ISA should be abolished".
k la, maybe a bit la. but the amazing thing is how she ignored this one, which was right before the one about the babies:
"i'd probably agree with the writer,
if the rally had been a racial one, or about something frivolous,
like removing the Eye on Malaysia from Malacca
(because it is a waste of money)"
amreeta: "your second one is factually wrong."
if the rally had been a racial one, or about something frivolous,
like removing the Eye on Malaysia from Malacca
(because it is a waste of money)"
hmm.
5 comments:
"this is an example of how a wonderful piece of writing can be destroyed by a melodramatic sentence or how it can be undervalued by making silly arguments...
...but apart from that almost perfect grammar(hint*) and excellent vocabulary(hint*) that was consistent throughout the essay....
...maturity in her arguments and note also how her(another hint*)sentence structure vary...
all in all very well done piece of work... " -Ms Gill-
this was what she said in our class after reading ur summary in our clas..[we all thought it was awesome!!!=) well done!]
as we were attentively listening to her [in awe..], we were screening in our mind, the possible candidates for this essay..
topping the list was of course u..
but i thought myb it could be amreeta..
and when she read the eye of malaysia part...
me,evelyn,yee mun,and a few others simultaneously : "Tse Hwei...!"=)
totally blew ur cover..[ Ms.Gill was trying very hard not expose who u are..among her efforts was to totally ignore that we were all whispering[and at one point screamed] your name..not that it worked though..lol]-_-"
hehe..p/s: go back and find "gadoh".=)
Apalah, my wonderful piece of writing destroyed and undervalued eh. T_T K, she didn't say 'making silly arguments' in my class. Ahaha. She did say it weakens my argument. Ahahahaha. Wah maturity. *bangga* Hahaha.
Thanks. Hahaha.
ROFL. Eye on Malaysia. Ahahahahaha~
My lil brother found it d. It was in his cupboard, he says. Hahaha. He's passing it to a friend who'll bring it up this Sunday. Woohoo!
Ken found gadoh when i was gaduhing with him
hahaha...nvm, it's stil a great piece of writing..=)
woo hoo!!gadoh on the way..lol!
[Saun] And Ken forgot to pass to Melissa. Hahahaha~
[Jira] Yay! Haha. No Gadoh! But got something else. Hee.
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