Amreeta
Guess what? I joined a pantun-writing competition in First College. Lousy pantun lah I wrote.Tse Hwei
Ooooo let me try! Dayung sampan di Selat Melaka... Nelayan semua kacak-kacak belaka... then "merdeka!" for the last line, but I can't think of something for the third line.Long story short, our end-product:
Dayung sampan di Selat Melaka,
Nelayan semua kacak-kacak belaka.
Ingin saya merompak mereka,
Untuk alih perhatian, saya melaung "Merdeka!"
- Amreeta Kaur Dhillon & Lim Tse Hwei -
You saw this first on Hwei's blog. =D
Tse Hwei
It doesn't make sense. It's like, completely pembayang for all four lines.
1 comment:
Wah.. all pembayang.
Four shadows without a subject. Hmm... mysterious.
Nampaknya saudari Amreeta dan saudari Hwei berjaya mencipta 'sub-genre' pantun yang baru!
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